Summary (Draft 2)

In the article “IoT based Smart Parking Systems for Smart Cities”, hIOTron (n.d.)(2020), claims that effective management of parking space will prevent traffic congestion. Smart parking utilizes sensors installed on lots to detect lot availability. Smart parking can be used in offices and shopping malls. Occupants can book in advance the desired lot while receiving real time accessibility. When the sensors confirm a vacant lot, the car will be parked automatically. For an IoT solution, it must make it easy to transfer field data to the cloud at low cost and increased ROI. Challenges faced include real upfront costs, as in-ground sensors can incur additional cost of two parking systems. Smart parking authentication is done using an RFID tag and data collected is reserved in the cloud. The app would find a vacant lot and send the location to the user after registration is completed. Optimal parking is achieved with minimal time and effort while enhancing the user’s experience.

 

Revised 06/10/2020


Reference:

hIOTron. (2020). IoT based Smart Parking Systems for Smart Cities.

Retrieved from https://www.hiotron.com/smart-parking/


Comments

  1. Hi Eryn,
    The content of your summary is informative and well written. However, there are some mistakes in the post that you can correct.

    1. "Occupants can book in advance the desired lot while receiving real time accessibility and when the sensors confirm a vacant lot, the car will be parked automatically"
    -I believe that you can change this structure by splitting this sentence into the 2 different sentences, by adding a full stop after "receiving real time accessibility" as it can be too lengthy to read.

    2. "Smart parking authentication is done using an RFID tag, data collected is reserved in the cloud".
    -I also believe that you can add a conjunction word 'and' between the 2 phrases to show the link.

    I hope to get to know you better and work closely together for our project!

    Regards,
    Si Ting

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    1. Hi Si Ting, thank you for the comments. I will make the necessary changes.

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